To revise my proposal draft I will add in my citations to my paper. I will also try to meet the word count requirements needed. Right now I am sitting at about 1,200 words and I need to have at least 2,000 words. To be able to have the 2,00 word count I will add in my citations and add in a couple more examples and facts that have to go in with my proposal to make my point o why Food Allergen classes should be taken and why it would decrease the number of allergic reactions. I will also be adding and deleting some comments that my peers have made aware that could be changed and what could make my proposal stronger.
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